And now for something completely different...

Some of you may know that I am publishing a book of my method by the end of the summer. Who knew that the hardest part would be picking a pattern. So, I need your help. Here's the one I came up with and did it in grey so that it was neutral and you could use whatever your favorite colors are.

But I need to know, if you like it and if not why. Also, please let me know if there's a fairly simple paper piecing pattern that you think would work better.

Thank you in advance.